jmtb02's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[suck my dick: the movie]

Idea...

I would turn all your stick figures into drawn characters with voices and personalities. The only real surviving stick figure animations are ones that are really well done by great artists. The bar has been raised extremely high for stick figures.

Otherwise, go somewhere with this. See how people react the trailer and make the full version a success. Take the praise or criticism and use it to your advantage.

--jmtb02

[Punch'd (2004)]

Funny, i enjoyed it

Good parody, that guy had it coming to him. Congrats, a series would be great!

--jmtb02

[Opperation CresentMoon]

Great first submission

The sound was excellent, as were the graphics. Not many first submissions have such good graphics. The story was funny as well. To touch on some points that need to be fixed, your animation was a bit rough. Working your animation and graphics seemlessly will earn you a much higher score from me. It was also a little short. But that's okay, the humor was enough to keep me happy.

Excellent first submission. Keep up the good work.

--jmtb02

PS. They released Flash MX 2004 a while back, which is the equivilent to flash 7. Maybe it's time for an upgrade. flash 6 is also good.

Shifty55 responds:

Thanks for the review, my next flash will be done smoother, probably serious, with hopefully a smaller file size to to the lenght of the flash

[[Heaven]]

Great job for a beginner

Congrats on your first submission! Your animation and graphics are very good. Characters were well drawn. Overall it was a good movie. Some small flaws, like rough transitions, can be worked on in a future movie.

Just to warn you, you have to be careful asking to "rate nicely," because this throws a lot of people to give you bad scores because you asked. Just a warning.

Great job, I hope to see some more work in the future. Some of the best first submission stuff I've seen!

--jmtb02

CloseToGhost responds:

Wow, thanks alot man :)

Yeah, I changed it to "consider that before voting" if they don't get that then they've got issues. Cheers!

[Lost It]

Artistically Beautiful

Not a normal NG submission, quite abstract compared to most animations submitted. It was really interesting to watch, the flow and animation was beautiful. Didn't keep a theme, but didn't need one.

Keep up the good work, its great to see more abstract artistic work on Newgrounds.

--jmtb02

[PALADIN episode 1]

Absolutely Beautiful!

Your time has been worth the effort, this is a fantastic movie. Congratulations on all your hard work.

Your grasp of animation and graphics is great. Pretty original story, and sound was good. Runs smoothly, everything is on track.

Keep up the good work. I hope to see some more things in the future.

--jmtb02

[Walk-Smash-Walk]

Awesome Movie

The music and animation go together so well, this is such a great movie. Everything flows wonderfully. I love the concept and the originality of the work. Great job. You are gettting a 5 from me!

--jmtb02

[L1F3 Shorts ep.1]

Great short

Not many animations make me laugh, this was great. The graphics and animation were good, the voices were okay I guess.

I gave an extra point in humor for having mj land on the guy.

Great job,
--jmtb02

[The Potato-Man]

haha, that was great

The animation was great, even greater is that the guy is playing a banjo.

Liked it a lot, great short. Great song too.

--jmtb02

[Another Postcard]

I guess it was okay

It looks like youre a newbie to flash animation, and if you are, not bad for a first submission. The one thing thats a horrible cliche in flash is a really bad shape tween, which happened in the beginning of the movie with your logo. Get that out of there and I would give you a few more points. Looks like you did a lot of frame by frame animation that took a lot of time.

Work on your animation, your graphics are fine, just the animation tweening. Keep it up.

-jmtb02